Student Poetry Competition 2026 Finalist: Brix and other sweetness

Brix and other sweetness

by Victoria Meng, Huntingtower
Years 11 – 12 Ekphrastic Poetry Finalist

‘Pink Ladies’ by Julia Abbey (2025)

 

To create a Pink Lady, merge the two mothers—

Lady Williams. Golden Delicious.

A little pollen

carried from flower to flower,

then years of weather.

 

Morning—

now the chair

has another chair

on the wall

 

Geraniums

lean from a planter—

marked RECIPE.

 

She should come into colour gradually.

Eighty millimetres,

Fifty per cent blush,

Sixteen degrees Brix, minimum.

 

Give the first name back:

Cripps Pink

 

Diamond, diamond, diamond—

at the edge of the carpet– where

two chosen ones lie open.

 

Nothing pink inside them.

Only flesh— yellowing

where the knife went through.

 

The knife itself has left.

So has whoever sat here,

if anyone did.

 

Afternoon keeps the chair’s other body

upright on the wall—

taller, greyer, impossible to move.

 

Soon cut fruit will brown.

Flowers will continue

their small red argument with the carpet.

 

And the empty chair

will go on casting—

 

something larger than itself.